In today's Ghana - it is extremely dangerous for a lady of your age to move out of your parents home and live on your own all alone in a house, even if you have a security man. He could be influenced with money to betray you. ... read full comment
In today's Ghana - it is extremely dangerous for a lady of your age to move out of your parents home and live on your own all alone in a house, even if you have a security man. He could be influenced with money to betray you.
Thank God you are alive. Stay with your parents till you marry, then you and your husband could start life in your new home.
The world is full of wickedness so be careful.God bless you and God bless your parents.
Nii Teiko 7 years ago
Nice fiction work. Keep it up lady. But what make it sound like Ananse story is your needless bravado to meet the guy without informing the police or anybody. Are you that idiot to meet somebody who carry gun to steal? Anybod ... read full comment
Nice fiction work. Keep it up lady. But what make it sound like Ananse story is your needless bravado to meet the guy without informing the police or anybody. Are you that idiot to meet somebody who carry gun to steal? Anybody who carry gun for whatever operation is a potential killer. You do a little work on that portion to make the sound a bit credible.
Chief 7 years ago
Think you're right, nice piece set up in a comical style portraying what money can do, and its consequences.
Hope you can be a good novelist.
Keep it up the introduction is good, the body good as well. Try to work on your ... read full comment
Think you're right, nice piece set up in a comical style portraying what money can do, and its consequences.
Hope you can be a good novelist.
Keep it up the introduction is good, the body good as well. Try to work on your conclusion next time .
Love your quality of spirit that enables you face danger without fear, but mind you many a great men and women did not live long to see the end of the battle.
peeeee 7 years ago
How did he get your number?you would have told someone re the meeting and also insisted he told you who contracted him or you would have him arrested
How did he get your number?you would have told someone re the meeting and also insisted he told you who contracted him or you would have him arrested
In today's Ghana - it is extremely dangerous for a lady of your age to move out of your parents home and live on your own all alone in a house, even if you have a security man. He could be influenced with money to betray you. ...
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Nice fiction work. Keep it up lady. But what make it sound like Ananse story is your needless bravado to meet the guy without informing the police or anybody. Are you that idiot to meet somebody who carry gun to steal? Anybod ...
read full comment
Think you're right, nice piece set up in a comical style portraying what money can do, and its consequences.
Hope you can be a good novelist.
Keep it up the introduction is good, the body good as well. Try to work on your ...
read full comment
How did he get your number?you would have told someone re the meeting and also insisted he told you who contracted him or you would have him arrested