I generally get the drift of your sentences but if you want to keep writing seriously in a language, you should also obey the rules that govern it. Try to avoid being verbose. If you use a simpler style it might help.
I generally get the drift of your sentences but if you want to keep writing seriously in a language, you should also obey the rules that govern it. Try to avoid being verbose. If you use a simpler style it might help.
Osei Kofi 10 years ago
There is no depth in the essay.Too lightweight I think written by an amateur who is just trying his hand on writing.
There is no depth in the essay.Too lightweight I think written by an amateur who is just trying his hand on writing.
Kwame Joe 10 years ago
Since you are a professional writer, Mr. Osei Kofi, why don't you show those of us who have problem with writing perfect essay.
Since you are a professional writer, Mr. Osei Kofi, why don't you show those of us who have problem with writing perfect essay.
Mahmoud 10 years ago
Ghanaians are visibly yearning for a change to liberate themselves from the corrupt nation wreckers' party which has brought untold hardship on them.
NPP party, on the other hand, has what it takes to save the nation from ... read full comment
Ghanaians are visibly yearning for a change to liberate themselves from the corrupt nation wreckers' party which has brought untold hardship on them.
NPP party, on the other hand, has what it takes to save the nation from the sinking ship, and fully prepared to take over from the NDC con men democratically through free and fair elections.
Their water gating tactics will not save them because Ghanaians have seen the light, and their attempt to divert attention of the electorate from the real issues confronting the nation will also backfire on them.
Author 10 years ago
CHE & Osei Kofi, thanks for observations and critique. Some of my articles are purposely written not for the ordinary and imprudent minds. I'm grateful.
Recommend you guys read THE BOOKS OF MASK BY REMY DE GOURMONT
CHE & Osei Kofi, thanks for observations and critique. Some of my articles are purposely written not for the ordinary and imprudent minds. I'm grateful.
Recommend you guys read THE BOOKS OF MASK BY REMY DE GOURMONT
MARCUS AMPADU 10 years ago
Nana Akwah, what you were trying to say is not limited to only NPP & NDC alone, but could be applied to all six political parties..
We are a fledgling democracy; and since 1992 Ghanaians feel proud of our democratic dispen ... read full comment
Nana Akwah, what you were trying to say is not limited to only NPP & NDC alone, but could be applied to all six political parties..
We are a fledgling democracy; and since 1992 Ghanaians feel proud of our democratic dispensation, especially the freedoms we now enjoy.
Each of the political parties are eager to be in power;
all of them, however, fail miserably to push their policies, nor do they succeed in advertising the measurable processes the party intends to use to actualise the policies.
We end up with being cynical, blaming the governmenti, and unnecessarily tribalistic.
back door director 10 years ago
Sad for you
Sad for you
Forson 10 years ago
The NPP had put in clandestine plans in their "grand conspiracy " to sabotage Mahama by making him unattractive to voters,so that Akuffo Addo gets elected,come 2016,being his last shot at the presidency.
But this plan has bo ... read full comment
The NPP had put in clandestine plans in their "grand conspiracy " to sabotage Mahama by making him unattractive to voters,so that Akuffo Addo gets elected,come 2016,being his last shot at the presidency.
But this plan has bounced back to them.God is punishing them.They will know no peace!!!!!.
I generally get the drift of your sentences but if you want to keep writing seriously in a language, you should also obey the rules that govern it. Try to avoid being verbose. If you use a simpler style it might help.
There is no depth in the essay.Too lightweight I think written by an amateur who is just trying his hand on writing.
Since you are a professional writer, Mr. Osei Kofi, why don't you show those of us who have problem with writing perfect essay.
Ghanaians are visibly yearning for a change to liberate themselves from the corrupt nation wreckers' party which has brought untold hardship on them.
NPP party, on the other hand, has what it takes to save the nation from ...
read full comment
CHE & Osei Kofi, thanks for observations and critique. Some of my articles are purposely written not for the ordinary and imprudent minds. I'm grateful.
Recommend you guys read THE BOOKS OF MASK BY REMY DE GOURMONT
Nana Akwah, what you were trying to say is not limited to only NPP & NDC alone, but could be applied to all six political parties..
We are a fledgling democracy; and since 1992 Ghanaians feel proud of our democratic dispen ...
read full comment
Sad for you
The NPP had put in clandestine plans in their "grand conspiracy " to sabotage Mahama by making him unattractive to voters,so that Akuffo Addo gets elected,come 2016,being his last shot at the presidency.
But this plan has bo ...
read full comment