Some errors. DELUDE should be Deluge, and WASTED not WAISTED. A beautiful poem full of alliteration, rhyme, imagery, and cross rhyme. I like your reference to oppressive regime and unfulfilled promises. We grieve as we mourn ... read full comment
Some errors. DELUDE should be Deluge, and WASTED not WAISTED. A beautiful poem full of alliteration, rhyme, imagery, and cross rhyme. I like your reference to oppressive regime and unfulfilled promises. We grieve as we mourn our dead. We moan as we see decay all around us with minimal signs of development
Some errors. DELUDE should be Deluge, and WASTED not WAISTED. A beautiful poem full of alliteration, rhyme, imagery, and cross rhyme. I like your reference to oppressive regime and unfulfilled promises. We grieve as we mourn ...
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