This is what is called fragmented sentences. The introduction needs to be break up with one or two periods.
"Beatrice Arthur of B’ExotiQ label was awarded for her contributions towards development of African fashion..... ... read full comment
This is what is called fragmented sentences. The introduction needs to be break up with one or two periods.
"Beatrice Arthur of B’ExotiQ label was awarded for her contributions towards development of African fashion........."
Or
"On July 5th, 2013.......
But it is important to tell the reader the reason why she received the award right after using the "AWARD"
But congrats anyway. She is also beautiful.
Unfortunately, the writer goes and
JK 10 years ago
It is clear that this organization wants to do a good job. If they are to be considered important in this field, they should really consider sending at least one person for a refresher course on rudimentary writing. There are ... read full comment
It is clear that this organization wants to do a good job. If they are to be considered important in this field, they should really consider sending at least one person for a refresher course on rudimentary writing. There are too many grammatical errors in this piece.
In its entirety, it makes a joke of the contributions of Bea Arthur, and she really deserves better!
Nyansasem 10 years ago
Obviously, someone has "listened" and made some changes.
Obviously, someone has "listened" and made some changes.
Kasoa 10 years ago
Nyansasem and JK are two twerps! why do we always feel we are better than others? that is why we are always backwards in thinking
Nyansasem and JK are two twerps! why do we always feel we are better than others? that is why we are always backwards in thinking
June 10 years ago
congrat to her
congrat to her
GREAT NANA ANTWI 10 years ago
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nneka 10 years ago
An honor well deserved,congrats lady Bee!! This is just the beginning.
An honor well deserved,congrats lady Bee!! This is just the beginning.
This is what is called fragmented sentences. The introduction needs to be break up with one or two periods.
"Beatrice Arthur of B’ExotiQ label was awarded for her contributions towards development of African fashion..... ...
read full comment
It is clear that this organization wants to do a good job. If they are to be considered important in this field, they should really consider sending at least one person for a refresher course on rudimentary writing. There are ...
read full comment
Obviously, someone has "listened" and made some changes.
Nyansasem and JK are two twerps! why do we always feel we are better than others? that is why we are always backwards in thinking
congrat to her
ARE YOU IN NEED OF A FAST POWERFULL SPIRITUALIST?THEN Google or go TO greatnanapowerfullspiritualist.blogspot.com
An honor well deserved,congrats lady Bee!! This is just the beginning.