You spoilt the beauty of the poem with interposing and interjections, playing judge, jury, prosecutor and all. Learn to give us your poem to appreciate without your puerile running commentary.
You spoilt the beauty of the poem with interposing and interjections, playing judge, jury, prosecutor and all. Learn to give us your poem to appreciate without your puerile running commentary.
Kweku Donsuro 9 years ago
You should have put the poem together on one side and then your comments next. As it is, you interrupt the reader with your commentaries which should have been dispensed with. Let the readers do the appreciation for you. Othe ... read full comment
You should have put the poem together on one side and then your comments next. As it is, you interrupt the reader with your commentaries which should have been dispensed with. Let the readers do the appreciation for you. Otherwise you write beautifully. You lack experience.
Asiwome 9 years ago
Parenting is the most important work in the world. There are going to be worse gadgets that cameras to expose our secrets. We need vigilant and watchful eyes to protect the integrity of our children. Some learning cannot be a ... read full comment
Parenting is the most important work in the world. There are going to be worse gadgets that cameras to expose our secrets. We need vigilant and watchful eyes to protect the integrity of our children. Some learning cannot be accomplished in the classroom or through the media.
Asiwome 9 years ago
worse than cameras
worse than cameras
KSB 9 years ago
Re:Stop Infantile Commentary. Kweku It's an honour to have people like you reading my article. I have taken your advice. I know you mean well. You are a true critic
Re:Stop Infantile Commentary. Kweku It's an honour to have people like you reading my article. I have taken your advice. I know you mean well. You are a true critic
we thought akadu mensema had farted again!
and went back to read the article...
nicely done; love it.
You spoilt the beauty of the poem with interposing and interjections, playing judge, jury, prosecutor and all. Learn to give us your poem to appreciate without your puerile running commentary.
You should have put the poem together on one side and then your comments next. As it is, you interrupt the reader with your commentaries which should have been dispensed with. Let the readers do the appreciation for you. Othe ...
read full comment
Parenting is the most important work in the world. There are going to be worse gadgets that cameras to expose our secrets. We need vigilant and watchful eyes to protect the integrity of our children. Some learning cannot be a ...
read full comment
worse than cameras
Re:Stop Infantile Commentary. Kweku It's an honour to have people like you reading my article. I have taken your advice. I know you mean well. You are a true critic